Saturday, November 05, 2005

I bet I could

Hit you twice
Before your teeth hit the ground
From the first punch

Oh yes
Speed and power
They do add to the sound
Of that satisfying crunch

Of the facial bones
Breaking from a quick left
And
Devastating right

Keep it up you
Punk poser loser
Keep praying to
That dark edge of night

That is coming for
Your disrespectful
Shameless gutless
Spineless worthless ways

Just like in this case you
Hear of a brave courageous man
And all you’ve got is some
Low life scumbag thing to say



Neils
7:09 pm
10/30/2005
*
written in response to
some anti-anything protestor
making some smart ass comment
on another man's actual brave deeds
*
transcribed this time
2:00 pm
11/05/2005

N....again

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ambitious young pols blog it out on the Net
Letters from lawyers are flying in a controversy pitting some of Montana's young and ambitious political operatives from both parties against each other.
Just like so many Americans my friend loves the clubs and hip hop lyrics so he went ahead and built an awesome website about hip hop lyrics. When he's in high spirit he goes to the site and start reciting all his favorite hip hop lyrics. Says it's good for the heart. Guess what? I gave it a shot and it works great!

Anonymous said...

Spam on someone's blog?

That's low.

neilsthepoet said...

When

Your pants are too big
Your pants are too low
Who gives a damn
What you think you know

Rap and Crap
Hip Hop and Slop
Blooming idiots
Looks like they've got

A bumper crop


Neils
2:21 pm
12/19/2005